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The White Witch Haunted Me

10/26/2014

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I grew up in Fremont, CA, a lovely town on the east side of the San Francisco Bay. My Grandparents lived in the rolling hills of Calaveras County. To get there we often took a shortcut to the freeway known as Niles Canyon. Friday afternoon on the way to Grandma’s, I’d stare out the window excited to witness the spectacle of the canyon.

The two lane road winds along a small river dotted with picnic benches, dense brush that often shades the road, steep cliffs that reach high above, and old railroad trellises crisscrossing the canopy. A lovely drive for a small girl and a big imagination.
Coming home Sunday night was never as much fun. 

Growing up an only child, I eavesdropped on the adults probably more often than I should have. I do not remember the first time I heard of her. A lost girl trying to get home. A lost soul reaching out for something she cannot find.  

If you are familiar with the area, you've probably heard the tale of the White Witch of Niles Canyon. Depending on who tells it, sometimes she was on the way home from her prom, sometimes on the way to her wedding. Usually once she is picked up she asks to be taken home, across one of the bridges. Once the driver tries to pay the toll of 15 cents, which indicates how old this story is, the taker tells him he is paying too much, and when he looks the girl has vanished from the back seat. When they go to the address she gave, there is a family member that says yes, she once lived there, but died years ago.  

As a child, when we’d pull off the freeway and turn into the Canyon, a familiar feeling would overtake me, terror that the Ghost of Niles Canyon would appear in the back seat next to me looking for a ride home. 

I’d squeeze my eyes shut and keep them closed the entire trip back, an eternity of wanting to open my eyes and see her, yet being afraid of what I might see if I opened them. Eventually the curiosity of what might happen would win out, and I had to peek. My heart would race. I’d take a deep breath, hold it and open one eye. 

Nothing would be there. Relieved and disappointed at the same time, my eyes would slam shut again and I’d wait till the point I knew we were out of the canyon, the single stop light at the end. Once my father slowed to a stop, I knew I was safe again. I could open my eyes and breathe a sigh of relief.

I never saw her. Not once, on all the thousands of trips to Grandma’s house. But I didn't have to, did I? I carried her with me each trip. This Ghost haunted my childhood without any effort on her part all. That’s the true power of a ghost story.  Not the actual seeing of a spirit, but the fear of what might be seen.

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33 Comments
Allison Merritt link
10/27/2014 02:48:16 am

Great story, Renee!

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Renee CHharles
10/29/2014 03:51:20 am

Thank you

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Codie
10/27/2014 03:21:55 am

My childhood home was haunted. There were a lot of strange goings on that just became part of my everyday life...and my nightmares. My parents room was all the way in the back of the house. It was not part of the original house. The hallway leading to it was long and dark. The room itself was colder than the rest of the house. It always had an eerie feeling, and I would never be in there longer than I had to be. Especially when I was alone. My room was toward the front of the house. The furthest distance I could possible be from my parents.

My (step)dad was in Wyoming, trying to get a business started. He and I didn't get along, so it was a welcomed break from him.

I would always sleep with my door closed. Something I couldn't do when my dad was home. But every night, at 11 o'clock, when my mom was sound asleep and I was wide awake, I could hear very heavy footsteps walking down the hall. They would stop in front of my door, then I would hear the light switch being flipped on. The light switch was the only switch in the house that was very loud and distinct. There was no mistaking that the light was turned on. This happened for maybe a month. If i wasn't already awake, something would wake me up, and I'd hear the footsteps coming down the hall. 11:00 pm. Light switch on. I was always too scared to look. Sometimes I would hear dishes rattling in the sink (no dishes were in the sink. I looked the next day.) or I'd hear something else. When I heard someone in the fridge, I thought maybe it was my mom this whole time, so I went to look. No one was there, and I heard my mom, sound asleep, in her room. No one ever believed me.

About a year or so later, my brother was living with us. I was gone for the night. My mom was getting ready for bed and my dad and brother were playing a video game in the spare room. They heard her walk down the hall and rustling some papers in the dining room. My dad went to see what she was looking for, but she wasn't there. She was in the bedroom, still, getting ready for bed. She hadn't been down the hall. My brother told me about that.

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Codie
10/27/2014 04:15:25 am

I left out 2 things from my story. Not sure if they're important or not. The footsteps I heard coming down the hall, sounded like my dad's. He was very heavy footed. The other thing was that even though I was glad he was gone for a little while, I had wished that he was there. No matter how much we didn't get along, I always knew he would protect me.

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Renee Charles
10/28/2014 04:49:15 am

Thank you for sharing. That is creepy.

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Lisa Walker
10/27/2014 05:43:49 am

When I was 3 we lived in a haunted house. I was always afraid to be alone because i saw "The Cloud Man." When my father started seeing him too, we moved asap.

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Renee Charles
10/28/2014 04:50:16 am

Funny how kids always seem to know first, huh?

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Joely Bogan link
10/27/2014 05:45:28 am

I had a friend that had a ghost in her house.. She would tell me how the light would go out all the time. One time she was sitting on her bed and the bed indented like someone was sitting next to her. She said things like that happened all the time. It freaked me out a little bit. thanks for the chance. joelybogan@aol.com

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Renee Charles
10/28/2014 04:51:48 am

Thank you! And you are welcome!

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JeanMP
10/28/2014 01:55:11 am

No spooky event from my childhood, we lived out in the country on a farm, that was spooky enough on its own.
skpetal at hotmail dot com

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Renee Charles
10/28/2014 05:00:09 am

A farm would be scary enough for me too. With all those chickens and such. Yikes! Like I said in the story, our imaginations can be so much worse than an actual haunting. (I had that once too when I was in my early 20's, not fun)

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Mary Preston
10/28/2014 12:52:17 pm

We lived in an old house. Just walking down the long dark corridor always scared me.

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Renee Charles
10/29/2014 03:48:20 am

Old houses have a personality all their own, don't they. And it usually runs on the spooky side. Realtors don't tell you, 'When purchasing a house always consider the creep factor'. They should have to point that out. LOL

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Tracy
10/28/2014 02:17:45 pm

My friend was murdered and asked her not to come to me and tell me who did it. Useful story but true. Scared she would show up at night.

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Renee Charles
10/29/2014 03:50:50 am

Straight up! No visitations. Please!

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Ashley
10/29/2014 02:58:02 am

I saw my grandmother appear to me at the end of my bed a few hours after she passed away. Very spooky

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Renee Charles
10/29/2014 03:54:18 am

That would be spooky and yet a wonderful oppertunity to say goodbye, I would think? Yes, no, maybe?

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Krysta B.
10/29/2014 05:12:40 am

I lived across the street from a graveyard when I was little, on certain nights I could've sworn that I saw a shiny woman walking through it at night.

Morganlafey86(at)aol(dot)com

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Renee Charles
10/29/2014 09:28:14 am

My garndma lived across the street from a graveyard when I little. My uncle used to take me for a walk and leave me in it all the time. LOL Maybe that's why I am twised now.

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bn100
10/29/2014 09:00:24 am

didn't have any
bn100candg at hotmail dot com

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Renee Charles
10/29/2014 10:25:51 pm

That's a good thing! I've only had one, and it freaked me out.

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Phaedra Seabolt link
10/29/2014 12:18:03 pm

When my grandma was on her deathbed, she and my dad agreed that she would speak to my dad from the grave to prove to him that the afterlife existed. He would hear the song Yellow Submarine and know that she was there and all was well. The night that my grandma died, my dad was flying (he's a pilot) through a really bad storm. Upon leaving the storm, the pilot started humming Yellow Submarine. When they landed the plane, my dad discovered that he had a message at his hotel saying that my grandma had died. The time of the call was minutes after she had passed.

phaedracamille(at)gmail(dot)com

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Renee Charles
10/29/2014 10:27:24 pm

Oh, that made me a little sad. Thank you for sharing.

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Melissa Snark link
10/29/2014 02:20:14 pm

Renee,
I love this post. I live within 10 minutes of Niles Canyon and I drove this 2x per day every weekday when I lived in Fremont and worked in Pleasanton. I never saw the ghost, but I always sorta hoped I would. Thanks for taking part in the Halloween Hop!

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Renee Charles
10/29/2014 10:31:02 pm

Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed it. Such a small world.I used to make that same commute. Wouldn't it be funny to know we drove past each other on a daily basis 20 years ago?

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Tia
10/31/2014 06:57:47 am

Growing up I had a large family, including many cousins of all ages. My family used to have the best parties. My grandma was famous for her Easter parties. My uncle was famous for his Halloween parties. Halloween included a costume parade, bobbing for apples, piñatas, and a hay ride. Some of my uncles always liked to tease us all. One Halloween they decided that our hay ride would take place at the local cemetery. Normally we just rode through town. So this was going to be different, and very scary for young kids. Well we just thought it would be a quick ride behind the tombstones. Little did we know that my Uncles had dressed up in scary outfits and were hiding behind some of the tombstones. Some of them came up to the wagon and ripped random kids out of it. We were screaming at the top of our lungs and hoping we wouldn't be taken by the "ghost in the graveyard". It ended up being a huge family tradition and still continues to this day, although it has never been as scary as that first ride. I think my Uncles were the ones that made me love to be scared. It gets my heart pumping and actually brings back happy memories.

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Renee Charles
11/1/2014 10:28:45 am

Thank you for sharing that is a fantastic story. I love family traditions. Esp around Halloween.

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Sheryl R. Hayes link
10/31/2014 07:26:46 am

I'm in the South Bay and I haven't had that story before. It sounds spooky. Thanks for sharing.

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Renee Charles
11/1/2014 10:30:09 am

You are very welcome. Know that you know the tale, driving that road will never be the same.

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Shadow Kohler
10/31/2014 11:08:53 am

My house used to be haunted for years before we saged it. Every night, i had nightmares about this demon. In every dream that i had, he appeared. You know when you wake from a nightmare. when you go back to sleep, you dream something different? I didnt. My dream picked back up where it left off or a new one started with “it” in it. My bed would shake, my room would get so cold that you could see your breathe. The attic was above my room, you could here things moving around, people walking and talking, etc. You cant go in the attic. Theres no floor or any way to get in there. I HATE closets. The thing always messed with me in them. In my first bedroom i was 6 when we moved in, i had this room till i was about 14/15. Across from my bed, was a walk in closet. Every night before i went to bed, i pushed my recliner chair in front of the doors so it couldnt come out. Every morning it was pushed across the room and the doors were wide open. My glass dolls moved, my lights would just go out, tv would turn off and you could see someone behide you in it. The worst part though is when it would grab my legs and jerk me partly of the bed, or id wake up with him hovering above my face, or standing next to me. Ive even had it climb into bed next to me. He would tap and knock on the wall. He would open and shut my door. I ended up moving rooms with my sister. But that didnt work. The activity started all over. It even got a bit worse. I moved into another bedroom, and i had peace for about a week before it all started again. It would laugh at me in my dreams. I had a closet in my new room. It was small, i put a sliding lock and a hook lock on it. this way it would stay closed. I always kept my tv, radio and lamp on. I hate the dark and silence. All of it would go off at once, and my closet door would open. It once hurt my dog. I couldnt do it anymore. I ended up moving downstairs and sleeping on our couch. It left me alone after that. Well, unless i went upstairs. If i walked down the hallway, it would throw a bedroom door open and try to hit me. Used to scare the crap out of me. Now, i dont go up there. I refuse. It scares me, even though i know its gone, i still get scared looking at the stairs. My parents wouldnt acknowledged it until my grandfather came to stay with us. It was really mean to him. Jerked him out of bed, pulled his covers off him every night, shut the electrical off in his room only, would randomly set off his alarm. Lock him in his room, etc. I used to have friends that would come stay the night, when they did, they always went home in the middle of the night freaked out and crying that something was trying to hurt them. I never had one friend that ever stayed the whole night. And they wouldnt come back either. My mom finally admited that we had something when she went to sleep in my room one night. Her and my dad got into a bad fight, so she went up there to get away from him. When she laid down, a couple of my dolls moved, and the locks on my closet unhooked and slid over, then my closet open up and something stood staring at her. Freaked her out. She flew down stairs to get my dad. When they got up there, my closet was closed and locks on. My mom wouldnt go in my room after that. My house used to be incredibly freaky. Its peaceful now. Which i am so grateful for!
Thanks!
shadowluvs2read(at)gmail(dot)com

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Renee Charles
11/1/2014 10:33:26 am

Very scary, yikes!!!

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Renee Charles
11/1/2014 10:38:44 am

Thank you all for the great comments and stories. I will announce the winner tomorrow morning.

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Renee Charles
11/2/2014 07:45:39 am

Krysta B. You are the winner! PLease email your address to me at reneecharlesauthor@gmail.com. I will send you the zombie shot glasses.

Thank you everyone for the fun stories!

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